Monday, April 5, 2010

The Inconvinient wall

Thus it was named as the inconvenient wall.
The wall of my ‘discomforts’ and your ‘desires,’
My ‘own meanings’ and your ‘perceptions’
My ‘conditions’ and your ‘conditioning’.
I wonder if it is truly a wall or
The sole search for our own spaces.

14 comments:

Maya said...

That's really perfect !!
so many walls ... how many can we bring down?

Balachandran V said...

Actually, it is a 'convenient'wall! :)

Nice thoughts, nice lines.

kalpana said...

Thank you so very much and most importantly to hear from you after so long...!

ஸ்வரூப் said...

that's just a wall...

Sid said...

why is the wall so inconvenient ?
afterall it is our resistance that is stopping us from scaling it.observe the resistance,it will melt away if there is a desire for search.:)

Kalpana said...

The inconvenience or the resistance as you may call it ... its more like a realization...!

Sid said...

:)

Balachandran V said...

I was unable to access your blog for a long time. I think since you changed the blog name or something. I will look up the backlog! :)

P. Venugopal said...

nice poem, kalpana.

Charu said...

Many times we use this wall as a defence mechanism

Sorcerer said...

perfect!
nice poem

kavin said...

walls are beauty full
no need to break
is my concept of poetry
which i like to write it
yet.
iam ready to play it around
and if you wish
lets play together.
discomforts
perceptions
conditions
inconvenient
everything were
just illutions of mind.
and of course
the wall too.
but i believe
the illutionery walls
are beauty full.
i having so manywalls
with and within.
all are sorrounded
with rainbow colours
and a few butterflies
and a fine place
for the 'spacejet'.

Sumi said...

sole search for own spaces, i say

ஸ்வரூப் said...

collapsed...

:-)