Monday, November 16, 2009

I am an admirer

I adore her patience,
I admire her endurance.
But I dread the day when she’ll lose her calm
Will that be the doomsday?

6 comments:

P. Venugopal said...

A ticking bomb? Yes, I have a friend who is just that. A 'he.' Tense to the exploding moment yet holding on patient, smiling. I know the character. Sensitive writing.

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Take the positives and when it comes to negatives, treat her as another human :)

Good one :)

ஸ்வரூப் said...

that will be just another day...

Arun Meethale Chirakkal said...

Indeed! And if possible stay away when she loses it.

கவின் said...

title + of your poems.

still thinking said...

mother earth in question