Wednesday, December 2, 2009

We captured the moment

You were there, far away,
Yet we saw it together
The full moon

7 comments:

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Thats deep and complete thought :)

Tomz said...

Nicely written..

P. Venugopal said...

beautiful.
i too was moon-viewing last night. your poem this morning reminds me of something of Basho read before. i look it up and here it is:

banana leaves hanging
round my hut--
must be moon-viewing...

just imagine, the same moon, more than 300 years ago.

Charu said...

heheeheeeehee ;)

ஸ்வரூப் said...

mm...

:-)

commited to life said...

amazing and painful

p.s was just passing by

Me said...

wow wow wow!! how poignant. even the construction is too good.