In the guise of fulfilling their dreams and desires,
I turned a blind eye to my own dreams,
knowing well, that my eyes will never stop dreaming.
In the guise of the agreement to which I agreed reluctantly,
I untangled the lone attached cord
knowing well, that it was all beyond the purview of
attachments and detachments.
11 comments:
Perhaps your real dream is to fulfill others' dreams and desires!
Attachments need not have connection cords; they remain attached even when flung apart by the winds of life!
A suggestion: Instead of 'disguise', how would 'guise' look?
'Cord' is better than 'chord'?
Disturbing. Beautiful!
Attachments need not have connection cords; they remain attached even when flung apart by the winds of life!
Loved it...beautiful and thans for the suggestions
I wish there be no comments
I wish people took just a moment to stop, and listen!
Thanks
:) love u
Would agree with Manikchand ... few lines yet they mean a lot , unfurling the realities of life ..sometimes fulfilling their dream may not be our dream , but we force ourselves to dream that ..
sorry couldn't refrain from writing ... ur words just touched me ! :)
i could see many layers of meaning, but sometimes its better to pretend you don't see.
touching.
Thanks a lot :-)
nice poem, Kalpana. you do everything knowingly, don't you. i was looking at the expression "all beyond the purview of attachments and detachments." beautiful.
touching, profound
a little too serious words to have in a poem, but thats just me :)
In the guise of fulfilling their dreams and desires,
I turned a blind eye to my own dreams,
knowing well, that my eyes will never stop dreaming.
Well expressed!
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